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She tried to walk on water
Through droplets of crystal does she totter
Try the impossible, reality binding, tangled ropes
Miracles are your dreams, they’re her last hopes

Hands together, faith firmly grasped
Not worrying if each days is her last
For her faith is her anchor in a world of greed
Faith is all she will ever need

Then one day sitting silently on the pew
She stares with love-clouded eyes at you
And you realize your heart is disgusted by her
You laughed with hate, she mistook it for mirth

She lived an illusion
Took a trip to a false conclusion
That everyone loved her (that included you)
A river she cried as you broke her heart in two

Her tongue is sore from all the sour wines
Stuck in her bleak diamond mines
She had her dreams, but was left alone
Complexity gone, troubles grown

Longingly looking over the ocean
Everything to her is her love’s token
One last chance to walk on dreams
But when she falls, her faith falls between

Screams stolen by cold rich diamond hate
Her savior was just a second too late
She now will do anything to have the copper
Miracles is all she wants, not caring if proper

She falls to the bottom of a cold heart
That long stopped beating and never again will start
Water splashing as her friends watch her fall
Faith and Love, she tried to have it all.
©2006-2009 ~Remiaru
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Enjoy. :rose:

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:iconlilgurl724:
Your poetry is always so beautiful. ;; Absolutely amazing. :heart:
:iconremiaru:
Always? Hehe... you should see some of my 5th grade poems. x)

Thanks so much! n__n!

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Я хочу чтоб моя душа тоже пела; :rose:

:iconlilgurl724:
Probably better than MY 5th grade poems. D:
:iconforever-and-5-days:
...its so sad =( *hugs tight*

awesome, but sad =(

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Count down to the end, gonna make it come faster
Right around the bend is a coming disaster
Count down to the end, and we're here to get faster
Come on down my friend, it's time to MEET YOUR MASTER
:iconunicay:
Whoa. I like. :3 I like sad poems. Writing them and reading them. :3
:iconplanetaryfox:
That was very nice, too bad I can't offer an in-depth critique on it.
If you would like a really good critique on your poem, speak with =PoetessLaureate.
She is amazing at critique.

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Communication is everything.
Convey what you mean, for uninvited coyness leads to catastrophe.
:iconremiaru:
Thanks, I've asked her. :)

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Я хочу чтоб моя душа тоже пела; :rose:

:iconremiaru:
Hehe.. me too.. n__n

It sucks though when people automatically think you're "depressed." :/

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Я хочу чтоб моя душа тоже пела; :rose:

:iconunicay:
I know, right? Or they automatically assume you're emo/goth or something. What's up with that? xD

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