She tried to walk on water
Through droplets of crystal does she totter
Try the impossible, reality binding, tangled ropes
Miracles are your dreams, they’re her last hopes
Hands together, faith firmly grasped
Not worrying if each days is her last
For her faith is her anchor in a world of greed
Faith is all she will ever need
Then one day sitting silently on the pew
She stares with love-clouded eyes at you
And you realize your heart is disgusted by her
You laughed with hate, she mistook it for mirth
She lived an illusion
Took a trip to a false conclusion
That everyone loved her (that included you)
A river she cried as you broke her heart in two
Her tongue is sore from all the sour wines
Stuck in her bleak diamond mines
She had her dreams, but was left alone
Complexity gone, troubles grown
Longingly looking over the ocean
Everything to her is her love’s token
One last chance to walk on dreams
But when she falls, her faith falls between
Screams stolen by cold rich diamond hate
Her savior was just a second too late
She now will do anything to have the copper
Miracles is all she wants, not caring if proper
She falls to the bottom of a cold heart
That long stopped beating and never again will start
Water splashing as her friends watch her fall
Faith and Love, she tried to have it all.
















Comments
Thanks so much! n__n!
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Я хочу чтоб моя душа тоже пела;
awesome, but sad
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Count down to the end, gonna make it come faster
Right around the bend is a coming disaster
Count down to the end, and we're here to get faster
Come on down my friend, it's time to MEET YOUR MASTER
If you would like a really good critique on your poem, speak with =PoetessLaureate.
She is amazing at critique.
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Communication is everything.
Convey what you mean, for uninvited coyness leads to catastrophe.
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Я хочу чтоб моя душа тоже пела;
It sucks though when people automatically think you're "depressed." :/
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Я хочу чтоб моя душа тоже пела;
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